This is my favourite poem of yours, so far. I especially love “The flavor of ruin. it might not remain.” It’s an eloquently written poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your work. Cheryl.
Oh I love those lines as well, though they are not mine. those lines are written by Khadijah Queen & Audre Lorde. this poem is a Cento (a collage poem) made up lines from fav poems by fav poets. please see “credits”.
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You write with such admirable maturity. Well done!
thank you Boomie
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This is my favourite poem of yours, so far. I especially love “The flavor of ruin. it might not remain.” It’s an eloquently written poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your work. Cheryl.
Oh I love those lines as well, though they are not mine. those lines are written by Khadijah Queen & Audre Lorde. this poem is a Cento (a collage poem) made up lines from fav poems by fav poets. please see “credits”.
Oh, I see. Thanks for letting me know, they are great lines. 😀